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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 23 November 2017

Food tech - Smoothie reflection

Today, Wednesday 20th of November 2017. We did food technology. It was our first time making something! And yes, we made smoothies. Its not really a food but do I care??? No.

The first smoothie Sky and I had had:
Spinach, Yogurt, banana, strawberry and  vanilla essence.

It was, Different. In a good way, it tasted alright. It had a tangy swing and a wonderful smell. If you are not a fan of banana this is the the smoothie for you.

The second smoothie was. Horrible. (No offense Garth but, It doesn't work)
It had........
Spinach, Kiwifruit, 1 single lonely strawberry, 2 slice of banana, Yogurt and Milk. Sounds nice? It is quite tangy but um, after taste just... no. Garth please, Get the spinach out of this town.



Thursday, 9 November 2017

Sleep tight PT. 3

Disclaimer: Sorry for the delay on this story but it's is back.

Alisha Wiped her eyes as she ran to the garden. Following behind her was Sebastian and Elanor. "ALISHA STOP!" Yelled Sebastian gasping for air. "ALISHA TELL US WHAT IS WRONG!"  Squeeled Elanor crashing to the ground. Alisha stopped and turned. She pushed Sebastian by the forhead causing him to fall butt first. Alisha opened her mouth without the words to say, She looked possesed. Tom, Jassmire and Quinn chased behind her. As the stand in position all jaws dropped.

Horse.

I heard Analise say horse and so i decided to make this story about a horse.

Jamiea Gonzila Shantera Congshurutu Chang-chang is a horse who lives canada. She has 4 elbows, 69 eyes, 36 legs, 14 boyfriends, 19 girlfriends, 1 BFF, 2 friends, 6 Moms, 1 dad, 401 brothers, 599 sisters and 10,000 aunties and uncles. She has such a small family. Recently Jamiea Gonzila Shantera Congshurutu Chang-chang started university in Hamilton, New zealand. She went for one day, Then she moved to Canada the next day because she got bullied. Wonder why.

What makes a quality story?

As you may or may not know I want to be a  author. So i'm trying to learn what makes a quality story? So here is what i have learnt:

You must set the scene! it's important to let your audience know where your character is.
Vocabulary (Word choice) Instead of saying "I went to the park" say what the park is named, how you got there! Who you went with!! Here is my example "On the weekend (11th of november) i went to caudlands park with my best friend Anahera, We went in her mother's car." That's more interesting right? Also make sure it is spelt right. AND GRAMMAR! Grammar is a definite yes to a perfect story! Imagine reading a story like this: "I went to park with weekendeds." Like seriously. Thinking about it, Have interesting sentence starters like "WOOSH, Through the night sky soared Mr. Ravioli" And also think about your audience, Are they going to like abriefiations, Humor, Romance what do they like?

Ok so i sort of left you on a cliff hanger i don't really know but yeah, I learned a whole bunch this year and I hope you have aswell, Bye!

Wednesday, 20 September 2017

My secret life (The story of 3) Intro

Polar - Eclipse, Your typical 17 year old you would think. Welp, Not in this life. She is a secret youtuber... Her best friends, Paige and Erica have not yet found out. Polar is a succseful youtuber with everything she needs. But self confidence. She doesn't want to tell her friends because she thinks she will be un exepted.



Adam, A 14 year old boy with the best family ever! Only, If they weren't undercover. Adam is a spy as long with his sisters Paige and Lauren. Adam is the best trained out of all 3. But Adam does not want to be a spy. And definetly with his new mission.


Alexandra, A transgender  person, Bullied everyday for being a load. She lives in a labrotory and is a mad scientist. Currently she is stressing about a love potion.


See Part 1 on September 23

Tuesday, 22 August 2017

Octopus vs Shark

Here is my art and writing of a video ¨Shark kills octopus¨ here it is! Please leave me a comment and some feedback☺


Sunday, 20 August 2017

Octopus information.

The scientific name for a Octopus is quite strange. In fact it is quite crazy in my opion. It is called a Octopus (Oc-to-po-da.) There life span is very short compered to other fish,they can die at 3-5 years old. Octopus's come in 300 different species,these are some examples of different octopus's:

Blue-ringed Octopus      Dumbo                                      Octopus has different things to eat in the
Cirrian                            Normal Octopus                        ocean, but they only eat a few of them.
Argonaut                        Blanket                                      They eat small crabs,snails and fish!!!


Their are 3 ways to pronounce multiple octopi. 1. Octopuses 2. Octopoda 3. Octopi (My favorite)

Octopi are very smart! They can open jars of lids, camoflage and even kill! These intentelligent creatures are amazing!


Thanks too Rosie for helping me with this reserch click HERE

Tuesday, 15 August 2017

Sleep Tight Pt.2 ~ Harlynn and Analise

Alisha opened the book studdering. She grabbed a writing quill and started spelling. Elanor was curious. She got out of bed and tried looking over her shoulder. Alisha SLAMMED the book closed, It snapped the quill into un-equal pieces. Alisha threw the book off her bed. She turned to see Elanor brushing her hair. Elanor thinks that Alisha is un-stable. The next morning Alisha was quiet... She hadn't said a thing since 6:34 A.M. It is now 8:21. Elanor Sebastion, Tom, Jassmire, Quinn and Elanor were shocked to see Alisha in such horror. Tom had enough and walk to her. He just had to snap "ALISHA! You have been like this all MORNING! Snap out of it already, tell us what is wrong!" 'SLOW YOUR ROLL TOM!" Exclaimed Sebastion. "But look at the state of this women!!!" Tom screeched. "M-m-man... Room... Message... Book..." Alisha mumbled staring off too space. "Help me find the man" Alishas eyes snapped closed as she teared up.

Thursday, 10 August 2017

Cross Country Paragraphs.

Cross Country


Cross country is in week 6. We have been training for it all term (2 weeks.) It is week 3 so we have 3 more weeks to train. For training we do relays, beep tests, but one of the more important parts of our training is working on our technique.


Our technique is very helpful when we run. We use capital L arms. That means our arms don’t cross our core ( Our body. ) We run smoothly, by that I mean we don’t stomp our feet because then all our energy goes into the ground. Another of the most important things we need is good pace. If I sprint at first we will slow down in a fast period of time which means I will slow down in the first lap. That isn’t good pace. A great pace is to have a steady pace or jog at first then near the end we can run (faster, or sprint) to end it. That is great pace!

All though training is tiring, I´m excited to run for cross country.

Thursday, 3 August 2017

The Billionaires Curse Book Report

The billionaires curse is an awesome book. It is a long chapter fiction book. It based on 3 kids named: Sam Valentine (Older twin) Ruby Valentine (Younger twin) And the main character Gerald (Lastname not confirmed) It is about Geralds aunt Geraldine, She was recently MURDERED and before that she gave away her BILLIONS of dollars, Gerald inherited it all. Gerald is now on a journey with Sam and Ruby too find who murdered Geraldine and find the missing diamond!



Image result for the billionaire's curse pgn

Thursday, 22 June 2017

Sleep Tight Pt.1 ~ Harlynn and Analise

In a land called Mushville, Two warriors named Elanor and Alisha. These two were sisters, Real bad sisters. Elanor was shy and Alisha was brave Elanor loved animals and Alisha loved movies.  Alisha also LOVED knights / warriors, And intensness, So she loved fighting her younger sisters and brothers. And the brothers names were Sebastian and Tom, The sisters names were, Elanor, Jassmire and Quinn. Jassmire was adopted. The other 5 were not. One night Quinn awoken to a creek. She jumped out of bed and ran to Alisha's and Elanor's room. She shoke in fear and yelled ``Ali! Ela! They are coming!" Alisha and Elanor awoken. ``Who is? What stupid excuse do you have to wake us up!?" Moaned Alisha. ``Come on come on! Its not fake!" Cried Quinn ``Please come see!". Tom and Sebastian had enouth of listening to the racket and decided to come see whats going on. ``What is going on! We are trying to sleep! Alisha, Tom and I have Karate tomorrow!" Yelled Sebastian in a tired groan. ``Sorry brother, I just heard the  boog-" Tom interupted Quinn. ``Enouth nonsence off to bed now. Shoo" Quinn slunched her back and ran back to her room. Alisha lay back down and grabbed a book. It had a odd hand print. It didn't  look like Alisha's...

To be continued.

Wednesday, 14 June 2017

A little bit of courage

Everyone is able to be Cyber-Bullied. I want to stop that. I wanna put some courage and faith in you. I know life is tough -3-  And many many many wanna end their life, Not me, Please don't do that. When people do that they don't think about others, Including  family and friends. Remember, People are here for you. You can always rely on family and friends. Remember people love you how you are and stay who you are <3 Be happy on how you are and you don't need to change yourself because one person doesn't appreciate you. Stay who you are, Be happy with yourself. Be awesome and live life your way.

~Harlynn

Tuesday, 13 June 2017

The 6 sentence story!

Two days ago me and my thinking partners had to write a six sentenced story. We decided to base it on Spongebob.

 Here it is :D Once upon a time … Spongebob was an absorbent yellow sponge.

 Spongebob lived in a pineapple under the sea.

He was a REALLY good fry cooker at the Krusty Krab.

Unfortunately… he got fired.

 He was very sad and he missed his golden spatula, he wondered why he was fired. So he got a job at KFC.

Sunday, 11 June 2017

3 Facts about New Zealand.

  1. The Kea, A bird native to NZ, is known for pulling windscreen wipers off cars and eating the stripes of rubber from the windows :O.


2. The longest name in the world is in NZ and its called Taumatawhakatangihangakoauaotamateapokaiwhenuakitanatahu, a hill in Hawkes Bay.


3. No part of NZ is more than 128km (79 miles) away from the sea

I got this information from a book called: The New Zealand Ways