Sleep tight PT. 3

Disclaimer: Sorry for the delay on this story but it's is back.

Alisha Wiped her eyes as she ran to the garden. Following behind her was Sebastian and Elanor. "ALISHA STOP!" Yelled Sebastian gasping for air. "ALISHA TELL US WHAT IS WRONG!"  Squeeled Elanor crashing to the ground. Alisha stopped and turned. She pushed Sebastian by the forhead causing him to fall butt first. Alisha opened her mouth without the words to say, She looked possesed. Tom, Jassmire and Quinn chased behind her. As the stand in position all jaws dropped.

What makes a quality story?

As you may or may not know I want to be a  author. So i'm trying to learn what makes a quality story? So here is what i have learnt:

You must set the scene! it's important to let your audience know where your character is.
Vocabulary (Word choice) Instead of saying "I went to the park" say what the park is named, how you got there! Who you went with!! Here is my example "On the weekend (11th of november) i went to caudlands park with my best friend Anahera, We went in her mother's car." That's more interesting right? Also make sure it is spelt right. AND GRAMMAR! Grammar is a definite yes to a perfect story! Imagine reading a story like this: "I went to park with weekendeds." Like seriously. Thinking about it, Have interesting sentence starters like "WOOSH, Through the night sky soared Mr. Ravioli" And also think about your audience, Are they going to like abriefiations, Humor, Romance what do they like?

Ok so i sort of left you on a cliff hanger i don't really know but yeah, I learned a whole bunch this year and I hope you have aswell, Bye!

Togan language week

Vahoi, Zahaad, Henare and I made a slide for tongan language week, We made it last term but still, Enjoy! It was a lot of hard work

Random facts about sugar.

Recently we have been doing something called Food Technology. We were asked to chose a food/drink/spice to research on. Analise and I chose... SUGAR! The spice that makes all our favourite lollies. But what about it? Did you know....

White sugar is Processed. Brown sugar is raw,
Sugar is used for cooking, baking and art all over the world.
Sugar is grown on the leaves and steam of Sugarcane.
here is where i got a lot of info from. INFORMATION HERE

Toolkit labels!

We are learning to use out schools toolkit principils as lables. They are PARTICIPATE AND CONTRIBUTE, RELATE TO OTHERS, USE LANGUAGE, THINK and MANAGE MYSELF. SO say i was making a post of Te reo maori. I would put Use Language as a label. And if i made a post about friends. Guess what one 😂

Fractions fractions fractions!!!

This is a google drawing i have made. If you can not read this. Click HERE for a close up!

Multiplication!

3 x 0 = 0
The reason it is 0 is because it is saying 0 groups of 3

3 x 1 = 3
The reason is because it is saying one group of 3. Lets do harder!!!

3 x 9 = 27
How? Because 3 x 10 = 30 take away 3 from 30!

3 x 6 = 18
The reason is because 6 + 6 is 12 add 6 and it is 18!


I hope i helped you!!!
Leave me a comment!!!

3 Facts about New Zealand.

1. The Kea, A bird native to NZ, is known for pulling windscreen wipers off cars and eating the stripes of rubber from the windows :O.

2. The longest name in the world is in NZ and its called Taumatawhakatangihangakoauaotamateapokaiwhenuakitanatahu, a hill in Hawkes Bay.

3. No part of NZ is more than 128km (79 miles) away from the sea

I got this information from a book called: The New Zealand Ways