In a land called Mushville, Two warriors named Elanor and Alisha. These two were sisters, Real bad sisters. Elanor was shy and Alisha was brave Elanor loved animals and Alisha loved movies. Alisha also LOVED knights / warriors, And intensness, So she loved fighting her younger sisters and brothers. And the brothers names were Sebastian and Tom, The sisters names were, Elanor, Jassmire and Quinn. Jassmire was adopted. The other 5 were not. One night Quinn awoken to a creek. She jumped out of bed and ran to Alisha's and Elanor's room. She shoke in fear and yelled ``Ali! Ela! They are coming!" Alisha and Elanor awoken. ``Who is? What stupid excuse do you have to wake us up!?" Moaned Alisha. ``Come on come on! Its not fake!" Cried Quinn ``Please come see!". Tom and Sebastian had enouth of listening to the racket and decided to come see whats going on. ``What is going on! We are trying to sleep! Alisha, Tom and I have Karate tomorrow!" Yelled Sebastian in a tired groan. ``Sorry brother, I just heard the boog-" Tom interupted Quinn. ``Enouth nonsence off to bed now. Shoo" Quinn slunched her back and ran back to her room. Alisha lay back down and grabbed a book. It had a odd hand print. It didn't look like Alisha's...
To be continued.
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